邵宁老师2015MBA/MEM联考英语真题作文解析
时间:2015-01-02 12:47来源:未知 作者:立仁东方
2014年12 月27日考研英语二真题作文解析
------邵宁
考试结束了，希望大家能以平和的心态来面对考场上的得失。
Section IV Writing
Part A
47. DirectionsSuppose your university is going to host a summer camp for high school students. Write a notice to
1) briefly introduce the camp activities, and
2) call for volunteers.
You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET
Do not use your name or the name of your university.
Do not write your address. (10 points)
以下邵宁串讲讲义小作文预测：
1. 询问信 Letters of Inquiry
2. 邀请信 Letters of Invitation
3. 投诉信 Letters of Complaint
4. 感谢信 Letters of Thanks
5. 建议信 Letters of Suggestion
6. 推荐信 Letters of Recommendation
7. 道歉信 Letters of Apology
8. 申请信 Letters of Application
9. 辞职信 Letters of Resignation
10. 谢绝信 Letters of Declining
11. 求职信 Letters of Application for Employment
12. 通知/ 启示 Notice / Bulletin
13. 备忘录 MEMO
备注： 以下是邵宁在最后串讲时所讲之通知模板：
①There are several requirements for the applicants. ② Firstly, candidates should have a strong interest in English learning, especially in oral English. ③ Secondly, priority and preference will be given to those who have a good command of both spoken and written English. Finally,……
①There are a lot of awesome prizes waiting for you to take them home. ② Anyone who is interested in the contest is welcomed warmly. ③ What you need to do is to contact us at shaoning1229@sina.com, or to call us at 6253086. ④ Thank you very much for your attention.
The Students’ Union
以下是真题小作文参考范文（黄颜色部分为完全照抄部分）：
Notice
In purpose of enriching the life of our high school students, we are going to organize a summer camp for them in the Forest Park on Sunday, July 11th. Many wonderful activities are arranged during the period of activity. And we are now recruiting volunteers to assist in organization and reception.
①There are several requirements for the applicants. ② Firstly, candidates should have a strong interest in camp activities. ③ Secondly, priority and preference will be given to those who have relevant experience of organization. ④ Finally, friendliness and hospitality should be shown by every volunteer during the work.
① Anyone who is interested in the activity is welcomed warmly. ② What you need to do is to contact us at shaoning1229@sina.com, or to call us at 6253086. ③ Thank you very much for your attention.
The Students’ Union
Part B
48. Directions:
Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
以下邵宁串讲讲义大作文预测：
真题和邵宁串讲时所预测之大作文方向高度一致。
以下为串讲课堂上预测话题(社会生活类)：
1. consumption concept(消费观念)
2. international tourism
3. gender equality
以下邵宁串讲讲义大作文热门话题预测：
6. Key Words : Consumption Concept (消费观念)
1. The diversity of modern consumption ways stimulates the dramatic transformation of traditional concepts.
2. The rapid improvement of economic conditions provides consumers with more opportunities to enhance the quality of their daily life.
3. Due to the great influence of globalization, more and more people begin to pursue new and personalized consumption ways.
以下邵宁串讲讲义大作文模板一（现象原因型）：
As we can see from the diagram, great changes that have taken place in the sphere draw our attention. According to the graph, (…description…). The phenomenon is so thought-provoking that I can’t help exploring the driving forces behind it.
Many factors that contribute to the phenomenon may be summarized as follows. Above all, with the rapid pace of modern society, there is an increasing demand for various modern ways of communication. Based upon a survey performed by socialists, almost 65% of the respondents regard X as their top priority, compared to 46% only a few years ago. What’s more, the rapid development of relevant industries promotes the emergence of X. Last but not the least, as the result of globalization, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude towards X, and regard it as a lifestyle.
Based on the factors discussed above, all the analysis points to an unshakable conclusion. The trend does not exist in this single field, and it is bound to produce a profound influence on relevant spheres.
将热门话题预测句型带入大作文模板后可成真题作文（黄颜色部分为完全照抄部分）：
As we can see from the diagram, remarkable tendency that has occurred in the sphere draw our attention. The pie chart shows the percentage of residents’ consumption in a city during the Spring Festival holidays. The spending on new year’s gifts ranks first, accounting for 40% of the total. The expenses on dinner parties and traffic make up 20% respectively. (The phenomenon is so thought-provoking that I can’t help exploring the driving forces behind it.)
Many factors that contribute to the phenomenon may be summarized as follows. Above all, the diversity of modern consumption ways stimulates the dramatic transformation of traditional concepts. Based upon a survey performed by socialists, almost 52% of the respondents regard buying new year’s gifts as their preferable way to celebrate their festivals, compared to 36% only a few years ago. What’s more, the rapid improvement of economic conditions provides us with more opportunities to hold dinner parties at restaurants. Last but not the least, as the influence of globalization, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude towards the transportation costs during holidays.
Based on the factors discussed above, all the analysis points to an unshakable conclusion. The trend does not exist in this single field, and it is bound to produce a profound influence on relevant spheres.
无论结果如何，考试已经结束，希望大家调整心情，度过愉快假期
邵宁 12.27
------邵宁
考试结束了，希望大家能以平和的心态来面对考场上的得失。
Section IV Writing
Part A
47. DirectionsSuppose your university is going to host a summer camp for high school students. Write a notice to
1) briefly introduce the camp activities, and
2) call for volunteers.
You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET
Do not use your name or the name of your university.
Do not write your address. (10 points)
以下邵宁串讲讲义小作文预测：
1. 询问信 Letters of Inquiry
2. 邀请信 Letters of Invitation
3. 投诉信 Letters of Complaint
4. 感谢信 Letters of Thanks
5. 建议信 Letters of Suggestion
6. 推荐信 Letters of Recommendation
7. 道歉信 Letters of Apology
8. 申请信 Letters of Application
9. 辞职信 Letters of Resignation
10. 谢绝信 Letters of Declining
11. 求职信 Letters of Application for Employment
12. 通知/ 启示 Notice / Bulletin
13. 备忘录 MEMO
备注： 以下是邵宁在最后串讲时所讲之通知模板：
Notice
In purpose of improving the level of English, we are going to organize an English lecture Contest in the auditorium of the scientific building from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. on Monday, July 11th.①There are several requirements for the applicants. ② Firstly, candidates should have a strong interest in English learning, especially in oral English. ③ Secondly, priority and preference will be given to those who have a good command of both spoken and written English. Finally,……
①There are a lot of awesome prizes waiting for you to take them home. ② Anyone who is interested in the contest is welcomed warmly. ③ What you need to do is to contact us at shaoning1229@sina.com, or to call us at 6253086. ④ Thank you very much for your attention.
The Students’ Union
以下是真题小作文参考范文（黄颜色部分为完全照抄部分）：
Notice
In purpose of enriching the life of our high school students, we are going to organize a summer camp for them in the Forest Park on Sunday, July 11th. Many wonderful activities are arranged during the period of activity. And we are now recruiting volunteers to assist in organization and reception.
①There are several requirements for the applicants. ② Firstly, candidates should have a strong interest in camp activities. ③ Secondly, priority and preference will be given to those who have relevant experience of organization. ④ Finally, friendliness and hospitality should be shown by every volunteer during the work.
① Anyone who is interested in the activity is welcomed warmly. ② What you need to do is to contact us at shaoning1229@sina.com, or to call us at 6253086. ③ Thank you very much for your attention.
The Students’ Union
Part B
48. Directions:
Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
以下邵宁串讲讲义大作文预测：
真题和邵宁串讲时所预测之大作文方向高度一致。
以下为串讲课堂上预测话题(社会生活类)：
1. consumption concept(消费观念)
2. international tourism
3. gender equality
以下邵宁串讲讲义大作文热门话题预测：
6. Key Words : Consumption Concept (消费观念)
1. The diversity of modern consumption ways stimulates the dramatic transformation of traditional concepts.
2. The rapid improvement of economic conditions provides consumers with more opportunities to enhance the quality of their daily life.
3. Due to the great influence of globalization, more and more people begin to pursue new and personalized consumption ways.
以下邵宁串讲讲义大作文模板一（现象原因型）：
As we can see from the diagram, great changes that have taken place in the sphere draw our attention. According to the graph, (…description…). The phenomenon is so thought-provoking that I can’t help exploring the driving forces behind it.
Many factors that contribute to the phenomenon may be summarized as follows. Above all, with the rapid pace of modern society, there is an increasing demand for various modern ways of communication. Based upon a survey performed by socialists, almost 65% of the respondents regard X as their top priority, compared to 46% only a few years ago. What’s more, the rapid development of relevant industries promotes the emergence of X. Last but not the least, as the result of globalization, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude towards X, and regard it as a lifestyle.
Based on the factors discussed above, all the analysis points to an unshakable conclusion. The trend does not exist in this single field, and it is bound to produce a profound influence on relevant spheres.
将热门话题预测句型带入大作文模板后可成真题作文（黄颜色部分为完全照抄部分）：
As we can see from the diagram, remarkable tendency that has occurred in the sphere draw our attention. The pie chart shows the percentage of residents’ consumption in a city during the Spring Festival holidays. The spending on new year’s gifts ranks first, accounting for 40% of the total. The expenses on dinner parties and traffic make up 20% respectively. (The phenomenon is so thought-provoking that I can’t help exploring the driving forces behind it.)
Many factors that contribute to the phenomenon may be summarized as follows. Above all, the diversity of modern consumption ways stimulates the dramatic transformation of traditional concepts. Based upon a survey performed by socialists, almost 52% of the respondents regard buying new year’s gifts as their preferable way to celebrate their festivals, compared to 36% only a few years ago. What’s more, the rapid improvement of economic conditions provides us with more opportunities to hold dinner parties at restaurants. Last but not the least, as the influence of globalization, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude towards the transportation costs during holidays.
Based on the factors discussed above, all the analysis points to an unshakable conclusion. The trend does not exist in this single field, and it is bound to produce a profound influence on relevant spheres.
无论结果如何，考试已经结束，希望大家调整心情，度过愉快假期
邵宁 12.27
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